Sleeping Valor

*blink* lol. Okay! Welcome to YWS. ^_^ I will give you the usual new member update: 1) There is a 2:1 rule when it comes to reviews and stories. This ...

But back I would not go. To me she remains, beaten, lying in the snow. ^_^ Loved it. (Though methinks it is '...remains beaten, lying in the snow.'

Welcome to YWS! ^_^ Before I give you a critique there are a couple things you should know... 1) If you haven't read the rules or just forgot, you're supposed ...

'pitch blackness'

Welcome to YWS. ^_^ Hope this review helps! You should introduce yourself in the Welcome forum, if you haven't already. ‘The war ended 5 years ago, so why am I ...

Far-fetched. We all knew it! We never doubted that the man would fail --[.< Interesting story. You don't tell us much about what the man's supposed to be(but obviously isn't) ...

:D Decided to read this since you mentioned it. It's old though. =P They’ll follow me and then I’m dead, Done and dusted with all things said. I know my ...

This is sad, touching, but sad. (I'm a very sentimental person =P) Also, no great crit for you, sadly. The dialog at the beginning could have used a bit more ...

Mwaha. I actually got it. ^_^ I agree with Kadie. As soon as I read this it reminded me of a book I read where the guy was deranged--thinking he ...

Ok, I will tell you this because otherwise someone else will. 1) You are supposed to do 2 reviews before you post anything. In general, you should be doing 2 ...

Mwaha. First post again. ^_^ I won't go into grammar, I think you did a pretty good job. I really, really, liked this chapter. Dunno why, I just did. I ...

o_O Am I the only one whose page doesn't text warp when I read this? *gets the entire paragraph in one line* Anyways, interesting story so far. There are some ...

Congratulations! You commented on my story (well the pilot section anyways, it's turning into a novel now =P) and for this, you get a critique! ^_^ Everyone knows at birth ...

Wot? I haven't reviewed this? But I read it and everything! ^_^ Oh yeah, now I remember. It was very amusing so I couldn't find anything constructive to say. I ...

I was prepared not to, but I liked this. >.< You people need to stop making me interested in genres other than fantasy. Ok, grammar...I didn't see any mistakes. This ...